Hi Kaitlyn, Great job on your elevator pitch! I really liked how you started off with an interesting fact and then introduced your self. The interesting fact got the audience hooked into what you were about to say. I also liked that you talked about a lot of details about your product but it did not feel like an overflow of information. If I had one piece of advice, it would be to speak a little slower, but overall you did great!
Hi Kaitlyn! I like how you grabbed the audiences attention by using a relevant statistic. This really made me to continue watching to figure out what you were going to propose. The only thing I would say to improve on is to talk a little slower so the audience can fully digest what you're saying, but overall great job on this assignment!
Hi Kaitlyn,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your elevator pitch! I really liked how you started off with an interesting fact and then introduced your self. The interesting fact got the audience hooked into what you were about to say. I also liked that you talked about a lot of details about your product but it did not feel like an overflow of information. If I had one piece of advice, it would be to speak a little slower, but overall you did great!
Hi Kaitlyn!
ReplyDeleteI like how you grabbed the audiences attention by using a relevant statistic. This really made me to continue watching to figure out what you were going to propose. The only thing I would say to improve on is to talk a little slower so the audience can fully digest what you're saying, but overall great job on this assignment!